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Meh. Anyway, i like it, though i do agree with what HangmansJOke said. the breasts are too high up...
Also, just for a bit of '*pokepoke* here's some constructive criticism' the hair line, for how low you drew the top of the head, is way too far back. I realize that you had page constraints, but even then you could have just gone off the page, or made it look like it went off the page, rather than just ending the head.
Just some advice.
Keep practicing.
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Well I guess i'm happy the comments are "to high up" then "too saggy"
I will agree that this drawing didnt have the most well done hair texture. I think it was because i guess more than one color and made them side by side rather then on top of each other.
I think it's best if i learn more with photoshop coloring then by hand. hah.
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anyway, yeah. It's basically just a matter of getting study material. Look at some pics of scene girls from that angle(not that hard...it's the typical 'myspace angle' shot), and try copying that with your own flair.
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TURKS: F**king your shit up in style!
You are the reason
I wake up each morning.
Because I cant wait
To see your smiling face.
you are my sun...............moon.............and stars
Yeah i added a ton of random scene kids i dont know just to see there pictures for drawing inspiration.
my drawing was suppose more like she was just getting up or something along the line, so she wasnt really suppose to be all the fresh. I'v just been useing colored penicls just in till my Photoshop updates get in.
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And for you to make an accusation such as that one makes it clear you are too underdeveloped in mind to recieve critques.
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btw, I never draw Closes up like those so they are a little more Detailed or things are a little more larger.
But I will take Concentration into the Human body Learning, I'll be in the Art Institutes Next Fall so maybe then.
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You're so quick to judge. That's sad.
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I just always thought i think to fast to get things done and over with.
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